Version II: Confessions of a Vampire

Confessions of a Vampire

I want to bite your neck,

I’m tempted to come in close;

Like Odysseus wanting to come in

Closer to the Sirens.

 

I hear you.

The sound of your blood

Pulsing fast through your veins.

Oh!

The sounds are so sweet!

Just like the songs of the Sirens.

 

I want to feast with you

on a moon-less night.

The thought of together

forever makes me lust.

 

I am full of blood-lust

Hunting for the sound of your blood

Wanting our pulses to run together.

Come join me in my quest for more blood.

Reviews

[RyannCarrie]

i think this is a well done piece. i really loved reading it!

[Jinx's Heart]

Very mystical and unique. I love the tone of lust in this poem. You made is sound so unique and different. Your rhythm was awesome as well. I really like this poem! Well done!