Voices

The first: you’re worthless 
The second: you’re a disappointment 
The third: why aren’t dead yet
The fourth and the quietest: you’re beautiful

The first: here’s a knife 
The second: here’s some pills 
The third: here’s rope 
The fourth and the quietest: here’s a hug

The girl never heard the fourth voice; and she gave into the others 
The voices all cheered and went to find a new victim 
That is all but the fourth he stayed there and cried for he loved the girl and didn’t want to see her end like this 

Reviews

[Annie Rachele]

This is an amazing poem, and it has a lot of meaning to it. I have pretty bad anxiety and sometimes i worry that it can get to a point like this, I hope not though. Your poem and other things like this remind me not to think about the bad stuff and to keep fighting because there are people who love me. It is worth living for people who love you. That is the message that comes from your poem for many people. I really enjoyed it!

[Shae-Leigh Johns]

I'm glad I wanted to help people with this without flat out saying it

[Emosawa]

Wow, that's so deep. It has meaning that most of the world is s**t, but there's always someone there for you. Reminds me of someone.

[Shae-Leigh Johns]

yeah same I think maybe, were thinking of the same person.

[Emosawa]

Yeah, we are I think

[Shae-Leigh Johns]

[Mark_DH]

First of all I'll admit it's a bit darker than what I usually enjoy reading, but it's a great concept and a very strong message.

The fourth voice wants you to know you wrote a great piece! :)

[Shae-Leigh Johns]

thanks so much

[Dr. YumnaKay]

wow! It's a beautiful composition.
listening to the right voices is the key. thank you for sharing the amazing message. I loved it :)

[Shae-Leigh Johns]

thank you so much

[Dr. YumnaKay]

my pleasure :)

[Shae-Leigh Johns]

if you want go ahead and message me