our women

strictly for our women

Why do we treat women like s**t

Like what 2pac said “And since we all

came from a woman Got our name from

a woman and our game from a woman

I wonder why we take from our women

Why we rape our women " do we hate our women?”

It does not make no goddamn sense how men treat

Our woman. I think no man has a right to disrespect

A woman cuz we came from a woman without our

Woman we wouldn't be here. We all have a mama,

And we love are mama so we should treat every

Woman like our mama.  

Reviews

[Brent]

You make a great point in your poem: women deserve more respect from men. I think it really starts with saying "women" instead of "our women". It's like we're starting off by claiming women or something. They have lives independent of us and we can respect that.

Very clear message that women should be treated better!

[davidramos12344]

thank u so much also I fix my mistake.