Regrets

Regrets

A Poem by Not here

There are no words
to help me understand.
Quiet in the trees,
standing close at hand.
You're not far away,
just out of the shade.
Yet you seem so far
as the sun starts to fade.
All alone once again,
after I found such peace.
Now I look to the sky,
hoping for a release.
I never told you how
I felt for you in truth.
So I stand here regretting
you never saw proof.
Though our lips never met,
our eyes lingered still
and I regret my action:
walking down the hill.
I never looked back,
and was never forced to see
the tears in your eyes
as I left quietly.
Now it seems I was wrong,
you loved me through it all.
Until that fateful day,
when you took your final fall.
So I stand quietly,
in the shade of these trees.
Hoping to find peace
bowed down on my knees.

© 2015 Not here


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amazingly written
keep it up
:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Not here

7 Years Ago

thanks :) i like ur profile pic
Urja Gokani

7 Years Ago

welcome ohh thanks :)
absolute pleasure in reading this poem, makes me feel of some emotions strongly by bringing tears into my eyes. I read a no. of poems but review only the most liked ones and this is one of those...
really fantastic, i loved the way you had put the rhyming words, i love having rhyming words in my poems but sometimes, i try for non-rhyming too. your poem talks about the truth and reality; loved your poem...
thanks for sharing 'regrets...'
Anindita

Posted 7 Years Ago


Not here

7 Years Ago

thank you very much Anindita :) I really appreciate it
"Though our lips never met,
our eyes lingered still"

"I never looked back,
and was never forced to see
the tears in your eyes
as I left quietly."

These stanzas actually made the depth of the piece very clear. Just as a crystal.
All in all, I really loved this poem. Have I told you, that you are a really good writer? Well if not, here it is. You write really good. Your writings have meaning and they just speak to the readers for themselves.

Great work! :)



Posted 8 Years Ago


Not here

8 Years Ago

thank you moonlight :) ill be sure to keep writing. i really appreciate your reviews
Moonlight

8 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)
I never told you how
I felt for you in truth.
So I stand here regretting
you never saw proof.

what if is the saddest question ever penned my friend because it is the one with out an answer. Your execution was flawless and breathtaking! I really appreciete that your poems are always visually pleasing and easy on the eyes

Posted 8 Years Ago


Not here

8 Years Ago

thank you crystal :) and yeah i try to make them the most enjoyable they can be for the readers
I know the feeling in this poem. Awesome job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Not here

8 Years Ago

thanks :) and alot of us feel it
I feel your pain. It is very touching, well written

Posted 8 Years Ago


Not here

8 Years Ago

thank you celie :)
This was yet beautiful I will definitely
read more. well written

Posted 8 Years Ago


Not here

8 Years Ago

thanks butterfly :) i appreciate it
butterfly desire

8 Years Ago

Your very welcome
This is so sad. But it was truly beautiful, I agree with silent all these years it is something that everyone can relate to they regret doing something but by then it's too late. Great job :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Not here

8 Years Ago

thank you crystal :) i have too much experience with stuff like this lol
Such a sad poem, and easy to relate to - I think we all have regrets about things we didn't do or say while we had the chance. Good work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Not here

8 Years Ago

thanks :) glad you enjoyed it
Ok so, I like it. I think it's sweet but it leaves me with questions. I appreciate the mystery and in all honesty I have no idea what to say so I am in fact rambling on. This being said I sincerely apologize for my uh.. Actually maybe I don't. It's a thought process I'm getting there. Did you know it's a common misconception people have with writer's they say we always have words. That's not true you only have something to say depending on the situation and your feelings towards it. well, that's my opinion or experience at least. Now that I have that out of the way. I like it, I've nothing to add and nothing to take away. Sorry.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Not here

8 Years Ago

lol thanks :) or you could just take ur hat off and slap me with it. problem solved
Meraki

8 Years Ago

But that depends on the hat. You can't slap someone with a top hat, it looks silly. Plus I don't wan.. read more
Not here

8 Years Ago

true dat. true dat. yeah yeah yeah

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Added on July 27, 2015
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