Funeral of a Wedding

I think I might just fall in love tonight (tonight)

I'm really not sure if I think it's right (tonight)

But even so I'll fall in love tonight (tonight)

Even so I'll fall in love tonight. (Right?)

I'm trying not to let it show,

'cause I don't want you to know.

I think this feels somewhat right,

but I'm not really sure tonight.

I'm trying not to let you in

'cause I don't want to begin

to imagine what if it went wrong.

Could we still sing our song?

I think I went and fell in love tonight (tonight)

I'm really not sure if I think it's right (tonight)

But even so I fell in love tonight (tonight)

Even so I fell in love tonight. (Right?)

I'm trying not to make a choice

'cause I'm scared of my cracking voice.

What if you think I'm not right?
What if you leave me tonight?

I'm trying not to let my head

take back everything I said.

I really want to love you more.

What about all the things we swore?

I'm sorry if you're not in love tonight (tonight)

I'm really not sure who of us is right (tonight)

But even if we fell in love tonight (tonight)

will you promise me to love me right? (for life)

Did we really fall in love that night? (tonight)

I'm really not sure if we got it right (tonight)

But promise me that you will hold me tight (tonight)

and I will promise to be yours tonight (tonight)

I'm thinking that I've made my choice.

Take all of me and take my voice.

Make me remember what we said.

Kiss me and get into my head.

I'm starting to forget my name.

I'm starting to feel so much shame.

Thinking that I've got insane.

Thinking that I'll drown in rain.

Tell me if we fell in love last night (tonight)

Tell me that we both are right tonight (tonight)

I don't really need to be more right (tonight)

So hold me.

Reviews

[FlatLineBeauty]

this was beautiful and honest and just well it made me cry. it was great, Dante xo FLB

[Not here]

Thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the honest tone and good journey in your words.
"I'm thinking that I've made my choice.
Take all of me and take my voice.
Make me remember what we said.
Kiss me and get into my head."
I liked the above lines. Create place and thoughts for the reader to ponder. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Not here]

thank you coyote :) i really appreciate it

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Amy R]

Marvelous!!
I loved the structure and rhymes-
and the way u showed emphasis in the stanzas!
keep it up ❣
~Amy

[Not here]

thanks :) i sure will amy

[Amy R]

ur welcome !

[Corbin Driver]

Love the rhyme in this poem! Great Work!

[Not here]

thank you again :)

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Good use of repetition here with your unique structure--I admire the way you put this down with the stanzas and the breaks.

[Not here]

thank you very much Josie :)

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

You are wekome!

[andrew mitchell]

A good write reminded me of tonight tonight tonight by genesis my fav band, and read really well

[Not here]

thats great :) i actually havent heard that song. ill give it a listen

[guy drori]

I liked the structure of the poem which is quite unique. Also the words you wrote in brackets at the end of the lines really added to the tone and read. The ending was written in a simple manner which actually gave that ending more power.
Liked to read this :)

[Not here]

thank you very much :) I appreciate it. glad you enjoyed i

[Not here]

i meant it*

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

It's indeed reading like a song. Beautiful love theme, Dante. :) Rudi

[Not here]

thank you Rudi :) I appreciate it

[JayceeC]

More of a Lyrical piece by structure. Sometimes we don't know. we just close our eyes and Leap!

[Not here]

thank you jaycee :) and I agree

[Emily]

I loved it!!
Very well written!
The title is very intriguing!

[Not here]

thn u so much emily :)