I want to love you

I want to love you

A Poem by David Kwaku

I want to love you,
like the sun reveals the morning,
like my heart shows its transparency into the core of my soul.
I want to love you,
like the air is peeled off the sky,
leaving me breathless.
I don't need to speak cause when you touch my heart,
you hear how it beats and speaks the silent words.
I want to love you always.

© 2012 David Kwaku


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What a beautiful poem set on similarities =D Also very enjoyable the oxymoron in the second last verse !
Just one tip, to be gramatically correct you have to put a ' before cause, since it is the abbreviation of "because" (the ' stands for the missing "be")

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Passionate but gentle. Unrivaled imagery. Gorgeous piece....Wonderfully written, friend.

Posted 6 Years Ago


What a beautiful poem set on similarities =D Also very enjoyable the oxymoron in the second last verse !
Just one tip, to be gramatically correct you have to put a ' before cause, since it is the abbreviation of "because" (the ' stands for the missing "be")

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

what a gloriously poignant poem david. so gentle and yet so powerful. love the imagery thru the words; reveals, transparency,peeled, breathless...so very evocative of love.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Great imagery and symbolism. I like the frankness of this poem and the way the speaker seems so dedicated to the object of his love. The one thing I might change is your use of the word "cos" - you'd probably be better off using the proper form ("cause") instead.

Nice poem, otherwise.

Posted 6 Years Ago


After I finished reading this the first thing that popped into my head was "awwwww". But this poem definitely has a sense of longing to it. Well done

Posted 6 Years Ago


This piece has a certain sense of longing to it, a strong desire. I enjoyed this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wanting is the strong point in this piece. The words are beautiful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Very Sweet :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Love, love and love again! x

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is beautiful. I love it.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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David Kwaku
David Kwaku

United Kingdom



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