Today

Today

A Poem by daYdreamer23
"

letting go of someone you love so much is like existing and not living at all...

"
TODAY,
I`VE LOST YOU.
YOU SAID YOU`RE LEAVING
COZ YOU NEED TIME TO THINK...

TODAY,
I`M CRYING.
COZ I HAVE TO LET GO OF YOU
EVEN IF I DON`T WANT TO.

YOU SAID GOODBYE,
I JUST SMILD AT YOU.
THEN, I WHISPER SOFTLY,
"BABY, I UNDERSTAND, DON`T WORRY, I`LL
BE OKEY"

AS YOU TURN YOUR BACK
AND STARTED TO CLOSE THE DOOR,
TEARS FELL DOWN....
LIKE AN ENDLESS RAIN IN ONE SUMMER SKY.

BABY, I LIED
I DON`T UNDERSTAND,
WHY DID YOU LEAVE?
AND BABY,,, I`M LOST, I`M NOT OKEY.

© 2012 daYdreamer23


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hmm
Yes such a powerful read here. You express yourself very well.
I really enjoyed this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A powerful poem of sadness. I like the flow of words. The poem felt like a song. The emotion flowing allowing the reader to feel the pain and hurt. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on March 5, 2012
Last Updated on March 6, 2012
Tags: poem, poetry, love, heartache, sad poem, heartbreak

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daYdreamer23
daYdreamer23

Makati City, Metro Manila, Philippines



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