Three Lefts

You always left me 

Alone with my thoughts.

Then, you left me alone

To my tears.

And finally, you left me

Lonely.

Reviews

[Trigorin]

I like the title of this piece and how it relates to the content. I think you could cut the 'alone' in the third line, as you've already said it once and it would unify the stanzas a bit better, and I think you might want to redo the last line a little, but other than that, well done.

[devon]

Thank you for your reviews, and then really, really great constructive criticism in them! It really does go appreciated. :)

[Holly Mason]

enjoyed the title made me read
content just backs it up
really liked this write
thank you for sharing

[devon]

Thank you for reading and reviewing :)

[Mir]

Your poems are so simple, yet so breathtaking!
I feel like sometimes I think too much when I'm trying to write a poem. Haha I should take some pointers from you! :)

[devon]

Thank you! I think that it's good to think too much. Most times, I think too simply and write too simply. My poetry loses a lot of charm, that way, I suppose. Don't take any pointers from me! You've got a great lot of poems, missy :)

[Mir]

You're welcome! And thank YOU! :)
And if thinking too much had it's own school, I would be valedictorian. Haha

[devon]

I know what you're saying! Hahaha, I think I would rank pretty highly at that school, too.