Happiness

Happiness

A Poem by devon

Wet dog nose kisses,

Grass blades tickling your feet -

Happiness is this.


© 2015 devon



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devon
Haiku #3 written for a contest.

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Wow! Reading this made me happy too. Even with the simplicity that it is, you achieve at making the reader feel your thoughts and well... feel happy. Well done, Devon! A very sweet piece, indeed. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


This made me smile so much. How I love to walk barefoot in the summer, and my precious little dog is endlessly kissing. Pure joy. xo

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

devon

1 Year Ago

I'm glad you could feel the happiness I tried to radiate off of this piece!
Awww!!! Such a sweet and soothing haiku....So many thoughts of happiness hidden in 3 small lines....Very sweetly done, the first line captured my whole heart.....Full ratings!!! I do believe this one can win the contest.....

Posted 1 Year Ago


Such bliss portrayed in so few words. I love the imagery, can see every little last detail in my mind's eye.

First prize, second prize and third prize all rolled into one!

Beccy.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awe, I love my dogs! And outdoor concerts with bare feet :) summertime baby! Thanks for sharing and capturing this feeling so beautifully!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

devon

2 Years Ago

Thank you! I love that you said "summertime baby", because I was trying to capture the image of a ha.. read more

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