I'm alive.

A Poem by deadlife

.rebel.

Like a spear
It's going deep inside me
Tearing my soul, in threads.
Inside me
It is shrill.
The more I breathe it in,
Is the more it hurts
The more I breathe it out,
Is the more it hurts
Again-
The blade is sharp.
Choking me in
Cuting my inside
It's deepen my wounds
It's the air I breathe.
It's giving me lif
I'm alive.
I am Alive!

© 2008 deadlife

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KayOss

I'm alive! Nothing much to be said about this piece, except it's a thought-provoking piece that is deeply emotional and compelling. Well done.

Posted 16 Years Ago

Bhavya Kaushik

Very well written and a very deep piece.
Lovely flow :)

Posted 16 Years Ago

SweetPeachesAlways

Wow. Intense. ALIVE! Very good write! Great flow and imagery....tearing my soul in threads...wow.

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Added on February 28, 2008

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deadlife

New Delhi, India

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I was born. I live. I'll die. I know nothing. Where I came from? Where will I go? I'm ignorant of my existance. I'm uncertain of myself. No beliefs. No religion. No god. Know Go.. more..