Can you...?

 

Can you buy me love, dear ?

~

 

No, but still… I LOVE YOU.

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is so warm and romantic..
Love is really too precious for anyone to buy..

Actually, it reminded me of a short story when a girl asked her boy for the reason of his love.
he didn't replied..but when she insisted he complimented her smile, her way of talking, the way she walks and dance and told her that's the reason of his love to her..
Unfortunately, after a week that girl struck an accident and went on unconsciousness...and that time her boy came with a note written that...
"I actually didn't love you for your smile, your dance or your walk...
I love for what you are... and it's something which neither money could buy nor words could explain.."


hmm!
Great write! brilliant indeed 8-)

[Brianna Brie]

Loaded question...quite simple two lines with so much depth. Wonderfully written. Thanks for entering it into the In My Loves Words contest.

[laceyjane23]

another simple yet great piece fills you up with a lot of emotion. greatly expressed in such few words! good job!
laceyjane

[Kara Emily Krantz]

aww... i wasn't expecting this!! it's so sweet, so endearing. :) :)

you can't buy love... but it doesn't stop it from being given.

this was so sweet.
hugs

[KayOss]

Love. That most precious of emotions. For such a short word, it offers up so many meanings, impressions and connotations. Some people spend their entire lives trying to obtain pure, unadulterated love. Some will never experience it. Love is a thing both cursed and praised, but should- and could- never be bought.

[EliJoLee]

very romantic.
and very well said.
any girl would swoon over those words being said to them.
i know i would. haha.
swell writing!

[Natalie C]

Brilliantly said, honestly that has to be one of the few things in life that you would never be able to buy, along with happiness.... but I guess the two goes together.

Nice work on this, short but carried one hell of a impact, which sometimes is difficult with pieces like this.
You penned this 100%

[!!..Love..!!]

Yes I agree love is very precious for anyone to buy..
Great write..
and thanks a lo for reviewing "A moment"

[Travis Lawrence]

I'm honestly not sure what to make of this... I guess The Beatles song comes to mind, "money can't by me love". Perhaps that inspired you?

-Travis

[forfila]

A beautiful truth,, the fact some one would try to buy you love with all there belongings constitutes love in my books =)

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Sometimes the nicest things in life are free...nice, succinct work.
Light,
Siddartha