I'm not You..anymore.

..we should be what we actually are...

Forget me!
Do not forgive...
Forget Me Please.

I am wasted myself.
I know what I did
- I Did Your Wish -
So, if you curse me now
I won't give a '____' to you anymore!

As a boy, I wanted to be you
I always tried to be you
and I failed,
'coz I'm not you!

- and now, I know this -

Now my blood's no more settled in my veins,

~ it's flowing ~

I'm not what I was.

Farewell, my past
I won't miss you,
Don't miss me too!

Pretending to be what I'm not
I've lost myself,
But now, I'll search for me.
Let there be a mountain of troubles
I won't abandon hope...
I Will Not Cry.

I've conquered my fear of heights,
I'll conquer all.

I don't wanna be you!
So don't trouble my thoughts
I'm warning you. . .
Leave Me Alone!

Reviews

[Tovli]

very nicely done. a lot of emotion packed into this piece. thank you for sharing it. tovli

[Helena]

"Pretending to what I'm not
I've lost myself,
But now, I'll search for me.
Let there be a mountain of troubles
I won't abandon hope...
I Will Not Cry."

Wonderfully penned, strong, courageous sentiments from a man
who does know himself. Bravo poet! A very worthy addition to Tovli's contest.

Helena

[EliJoLee]

woww.
very powerfully written.
it has a sense of authority
and your mind pretty much made up.
i love it!!!

[Abigail Alliah]

This is very good, descriptive, and flows nicely. The story and concept flow very well. Many times we don't even realize when we've lost ourselves, and in many different ways, and this poem beautifully depicts the lostness beautifully. It seems like both a sad and happy ending, leaving others to find oneself. I love it!