..you call me a fool... COOL!

..you call me a fool... COOL!

A Poem by deadlife
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Muse write for 10/40 challenge. :)

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Finally, admitting;

Me a yoyo!

Bubbling mind keeps

Nothing in the know

 

Saturdays ~ Wednesdays

 

Days wander off record

 

I live in the clouds

 

But, I swan; will cross this lonely road

 

Cannot lure back me

Wisdom can never surpass

 Stupidity!

 

 

***

© 2010 deadlife


Author's Note

deadlife
Written for another contest of Albert's Poetry Cafe Group!
A 10/40 challenge where you're given 10 words to be used (this time, in exact order) in a poem of exact 40 words.
Anyways this is my take on the words.. :)

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wisdom and stupidity
stupidity and wisdom
what do i know
which is which kingdom

Posted 13 Years Ago


read like almost a rap segement--which gave it some unexpected power. nice. tovli

Posted 13 Years Ago


very nice 40 words~ i really like your last line~
peace
chloe

Posted 13 Years Ago



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deadlife

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I was born. I live. I'll die. I know nothing. Where I came from? Where will I go? I'm ignorant of my existance. I'm uncertain of myself. No beliefs. No religion. No god. Know Go.. more..

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