What do I want?

What do I want?

A Poem by Gigi
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Stating the obvious, releasing my mind upon the paper of what I write.

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 I want time to stop going fast,

like the known wind going past.

I want the ability to grow to the age I wish, 

then I would have the world on a dish.

I want to be able to touch and hold,

without having to worry how things will unfold.

I want the strength to be left with my dignity in tact,

even though I know your gone, i'll accept the fact.

I want to have the permission to fall,

so I can love you, and get past this wall!

 

 

So many things I want now...

 

 

But I don't think I even know how...

 

 

To get things that I want,

 

 

So i'll close my mind and let my head bow.

 

 

 

 

Focus now on what I need, then later on, what I want.


© 2009 Gigi



Author's Note

Gigi
So emotional, what stupid stuff to say... >.>

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this is so nice,it had a very special lovely feel to it
would love to touch and hold no worry how things unfold
want time to stop..so many things i would want though never knew how
this is really so dreamy ..you could go on with this..i really loved it
lovely write..

Posted 3 Years Ago


Gigi, the last line said it all.

Yes, we need air, but sometimes we sacrifice even that, for our want.

Really enjoyed this, thank you!
Antonio


Posted 3 Years Ago



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Added on June 2, 2009

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Gigi
Gigi

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My Nickname is Giggers. I am now 18 years old. I am halfway through my second year of college at the Academy of Art University in San Francisco. I live with two roommates and all of my old friends are.. more..

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