The Editor

The Editor

A Poem by Gigi
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Cutting is a way of Life to the Editor
Sometimes he finds her sore. 
I was watching him talk with hands out wide
Then I saw the cuts on the side. 

Cutting was his life. 

He obsessed night and day
Hoping to make the perfect way. 
He dreamt of blades at night.
They were always kept in sight. 

He woke early one morning.
There was blackness everywhere. 
He saw some people mourning.
He walked over to there. 

Cutting was his life. 

She was drenched with tears
This concentrated his fears. 
He looked into the grave,
another life we couldn't save.

© 2010 Gigi



Author's Note

Gigi
I don't know, inspired by a teacher I have. The only part that stuck with me was "Cutting was his Life", the rest is improvised.

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Improv is the best practice.. This is good, it leaves a kind of mystery lingering, good write!

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Gigi
Gigi

Traverse Town, CA



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My Nickname is Giggers. I am now 18 years old. I am halfway through my second year of college at the Academy of Art University in San Francisco. I live with two roommates and all of my old friends are.. more..

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