The Weathering Ballad (Ode To The Queen Of The Elements)

 

There’s diamonds in the sky

but rubies in your eyes.

The truth is bloodshot

when observing

through bloodshot eyes.

Rest your head upon a cloud

so your mind’s journey

can see past today.

Once midnight succumbs

to the light

your spirit can come to peace

with the seasons of change.

Then you can merge with the wind,

connect with the rain,

and become one with the sun.

Reviews

[VelvetRosetta]

A beautiful write, Penned in a unique way..love the flow to this.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[Emma Joy]

Others have written how i feel.. the truth of your words, especially those last three lines .. beautiful. The weather's a carousel .. part man-made, part Nature; but we're the Queen's servants.. sadly, not always good ones but here you display the best and brightest of how it can be.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

A very interesting perspective classy lady... thank you so much.

[Elisa Laura]

Beautiful. A true friends message.
Nature is such in balance as she turns and turns,
But when the true feelers feel, it can be a miracle
Or a disaster... Hot and Cold winds make Tornado's
Even as thunders... depressions need clarity, as they
Turn around eachother... I love the metaphor,
Wonderfully thought out, as usually. It shall be forever a miracle,
That makes her elusive...

E.L.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are reading my mind sweetness... nature is an endless miracle that does not follow man's rules.

[Elisa Laura]

Indeed.... endless, it's gaia always, who can be the mom of all her children... in good and bad....

[Debbie_Philly]

WOW.... Last stanza is just beautiful.... I love to think thats what would happen... great job... !!! :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you... nature is the greatest inspiration and an endless miracle.

[Phantom Rose]

This piece makes me feel remarkably at peace, considering everything that just happened to me. This is how you find true balance, I guess. To merge with nature, to merge with the world, and what's in it. Then, you'd find the strength to live again.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you... nature is the greatest inspiration and the best place to find peace within.

[Phantom Rose]

Thank you, for bringing something beautiful like this into words.

[Dean Kuch®]

..."Then you can merge with the wind,
connect with the rain,
and become one with the sun."...
I liked the fact that you chose that line pertaining to the sun as your last one for this piece.
To grow, to feel , and to make an impact on a sometimes dark and dismal world, we must first strive to shine brightly.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

A great take on my work... I appreciate your input.

[MOON]

Ode to the elements , we are one smaller than the grain of sand and larger than the universe. Great write.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[Robbie]

I feel the serenity of this lovely piece....a tranquil breeze. Mother nature can truly bring a calm peaceful glow within us.

"your spirit can come to peace
with the seasons of change.
Then you can merge with the wind,
connect with the rain,
and become one with the sun."~ Breathtaking!...Thank you for this journey to a place of Peaceful thoughts.

[Cherrie Palmer]

...Once midnight succumbs to the light your spirit can come to peace.... I hope more of us find this poem Mother Nature is most superb and inspiring

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much Cherrie... yes Mother Nature is the ultimate inspiration.