The Crosswalks Of My Mind

The Crosswalks Of My Mind

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
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Lyrics

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1st verse

 

Life is a race

I don’t want to win.

Moving in cruise control

With you by my side

Is what gets

My heart racing.

In a world of bump and grind

I feel better getting left behind.

 

Chorus

 

The cross walks of my mind are crowded

But that don’t stop me from seeing my destination.

The cross walks of my mind is full of faces

But it don’t keep your beauty from being my guide.

 

2nd verse

 

Life is cluttered

With concrete ideas.

Feeling the breeze blow

You through my mind

Is what keeps

Me dreaming.

In a world of tall buildings

I get high hanging from the window.

 

Chorus

 

The cross walks of my mind are crowded

But that don’t stop me from seeing my destination.

The cross walks of my mind is full of faces

But it don’t keep your beauty from being my guide.

 

Bridge

 

Through all my fears and doubts

I want to thank you faith

For always believing in me.

 

Chorus

 

The cross walks of my mind are crowded

But that don’t stop me from seeing my destination.

The cross walks of my mind is full of faces

But it don’t keep your beauty from being my guide.

 

 


© 2012 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)



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Words actually ring true, a ballad type song with real heart, can near hear it set to music. The premise that real passionate love stops you roving is a good thought well repeated. Has a really good 'feel' to it.. would be grand to get it recorded.. have a go! Reminds me of good old fashion Country .. but then I'm a Brit and we don't know these things. Great chorus!

Posted 8 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

8 Months Ago

Thank you classy lady... I agree in it would make a great country song.
Emma Joy

8 Months Ago

Yayyyyyyy, clever me!
Lve it Dale.. sounds like a country song a bit-
Faith , hope and charity ... and of course love, feel all these emtions in this tune.

Chloe

Posted 8 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much my dear sweet friend.
Chloe..Across the Universe

8 Months Ago

Always welcome friend :)
Peace and love to you.
this is pretty good It could be better but definitely not bad (:

Posted 8 Months Ago


love the concept..not buying into the rat race..uplifting and inspiration :)


Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Months Ago

Thank you sweetie.
Oh beautiful words and sentiment

"Life is a race
I don’t want to win.
Moving in cruise control
With you by my side
Is what gets
My heart racing.
In a world of bump and grind
I feel better getting left behind."

Doesnt get any better than this.

Posted 9 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Months Ago

Why thank you so much :)
I really dig the premise of the crowded crosswalks of the mind. Nice how you turned it around and had faith believing in you.

Posted 9 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Months Ago

Thank you sir.
Would love to hear it.... Awesome lyrics xx

Posted 9 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Months Ago

Thanks babsie boop :)
Record it!

Posted 9 Months Ago


now that was a cool song i want to hear! great job! i loved the first verse the most but it was all good.

Posted 9 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Months Ago

Thank you very much.

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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool



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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Currently working as an Ag Tech 1 for California's Department of Food and Agriculture. Obviously I love to write. I love murder mysteries .. more..

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