A Natural Lesson

Haiku or senryu? How about Hairyu

 

Mother nature knows

that crying is essential

to the growth of things.

Reviews

[Sarah Redigan]

Very beaitiful ... u do good work

[writing mojo]

truth that! tears sow the reapers exiled ground tending to the hearts of man and everything he surrounds...great piece

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

very true. crying isn't breaking, it's simply resting after being strong for so long. love it.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is eloquently said. thank you.

[SparrowSong]

Yes, oh yes...with out a little rain, what would grow? You do these short forms very well.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks, they are fun to do.

[Circe]

hahaha hairyu.. make up your own form! this has an incredible depth of maturity and understanding.... just so perfect, only you could have put this so eloquently.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe thank you... nature is an inspiring muse.

[Renée]

Which ever it is .... love this one... reminds me of a rain forrest with the pitter patter of drips on leaves...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you... you should see the pic I took that inspired it.

[Renée]

is it that one with the drops of rain on the leaves?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

that is the one in question.

[Renée]

I had seen it when you posted the other day..just didn't comment.. ( :

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

No problemo ;)

[Renée]

opps sorry I just noticed the photo connected with the poem..I don't pay attention to photos or songs I look at the poems ... I will open my eyes wider next time

[Pawprints]

So true, so true

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[Tina Kline]

Very nice and so true!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[Tina Kline]

You're welcome.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

truth penned here ;)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[An owl on the moon]

Ah, yes.. the pure release that brings life... and abundance.. to Earth and everyone that moves across her slopes and waves. So well said, my friend.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly sir.