Addicted To Chaos

Addicted To Chaos

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

 

I feel your lips quiver whenever we kiss,

but it slips up if I try to walk away.

Why do you punch me in the heart

then try to hold my hand?

Confusion in my mind

leads to a confession from the soul,

this dysfunction is my addiction

cause I’m an adrenaline junkie

when it comes to us fighting.


© 2013 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)



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It's a roller coaster ride with ups and downs and twists and turns. An adrenaline junkie seeks the upheaval sometimes just to keep it interesting.

Posted 4 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

4 Years Ago

thank you very much.
adrenaline junkies come in many forms
this is a great expressive write on a topic that I do not believe I have read before
heated relationships border on needed therapy or this is just how this couple makes it work
apparently it does because they do hold hands*)
great title for this -I really do enjoy the content that you have used-
thank you fine sir

Posted 4 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your input.
Not seen much about miscommunication in relationship on this site this is good but seem incomplete. you could help me and my likes who are keen on knowing the outcome of the addiction and dysfunction with a touch of editing. stay blessed!

Posted 4 Years Ago


That is great. Right on I know the feeling of wanting to fight almost because its exciting as the making up is. Almost.

Posted 4 Years Ago


I can't argue with the plain-spoken narrative. This wins.

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is a very true poem about relationships and miscommunication. I hope that there is some resolve at some point and the addiction is overcome. I'm not sure whether there's a happy ending or a break-up. Nicely penned.

Posted 4 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
makes me believe this is the opposition of me. "she" feels confused, and confusion is definitely a left foot in a tango...thats where understanding and unconditional love comes in. thanks for sending me into a string of thoughts(:

Posted 4 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

4 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by and sharing your thoughts on my poem.
So good hearing from you.
Rebecca Hope Rouston

4 Years Ago

always a pleasure reading your poems(;
My life at the moment resonates this one to a very great extent! At times it unavoidable but slowly its growing within and changing my nature..haha

Addicted to Chaos..great poem indeed Dale :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

4 Years Ago

Thank you again :)
Man, I think I used to be like that, but that kind of living just got exhausting. It drains you of your life force. Too much unbridled passion (chaos), kills a man. from the inside/ out.

Good piece, D.

Posted 4 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

4 Years Ago

Yes it is exhausting and it can also be hard on your health.

Thank you for stopping by .. read more
Oh man! I am that kind of addict too! I can't help it...just keep fighting it!

Posted 4 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

4 Years Ago

I hear you.

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I am a Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, D.. more..

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