Different Shades Of Senryu

Different Shades Of Senryu

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
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Four topics, one style of poetry

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A Commentary On Spiritual Senryu

 

Fallen angels prove

That we’re not far from heaven

If we mend our wings.

 

 

A Commentary On Society Senryu

 

Twiddle Dee is smart

But the company he keeps

Defines his image.

 

 

A Commentary On Politics Senryu

 

Power and money

Keep criminals in office

The people bail out.

 

 

A Commentary On Humanity Senryu

 

I keep hoping that

Nature’s colors ignite us

Into one bright hue.

© 2014 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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Beautiful words of wisdom.


Posted 10 Years Ago


Very good. I especially liked the last one; then I realized I didn't want everyone to be the same colour...

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Thank you again… what I meant by that is hoping people stop seeing people as color and instead jus.. read more
I enjoyed the wisdom and the logic in the words. I tell people the world is simple as the written words above.
"Power and money
Keep criminals in office
The people bail out."
The above Senryu is my favorite. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Thank you kindly sir
and we will mend our wings on our own time..but eventually we will repair them...

with no help from the criminals in office...they just care about power and money...and not wings and things....i keep hoping we can all become one color too, but the company we keep seems to destroy that image.

these are great...four totally different senryu that actually blend together as one, if we think about it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Thank you sir, your reviews are intelligent and entertaining.
Amazing senryus Cowboy!! Each one has a powerful voice and substance. This is one of my favorite writes by you! Really love it...;-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Wow thank you, that makes me smile.
Oh I dig this. But I have to say, the twiddle dee one is my fave.:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

That is my fav too, thank you
I so like these, they show insight and wit, fine skill with wording and the genre itself.

A few more of these, Dale, you'd have a very publishable little book.. truly

(How about relationships, war, traditional poetry, modern art, car drivers, ambition, thugs, advertising, evolution, cities, the great outdoors, medicine, technology, shadows, genders, etc. etc.)

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Oh my it looks like the classy lady is challenging me… I take that challenge.
emmajoy

10 Years Ago

Laughing, am so bossy! Truly am impressed.
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Well thank you, I am not gonna do a whole book but I am gonna do another set based on some topics yo.. read more
LOVE these, Dale! My favorite is the Spirituality Senryu - There's hope in those mended wings...

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Why thank you very much…. and yes there is and the power to heal is faith.

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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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