The Universe In Surround Sound

I listen a whisper

         I hear a shout

 

I hear the sound of…

 

         A ranting child,

                  A scolding adult,

         A crying woman,

                  A shouting man,

 

I do a three-sixty

         Look to the heavens,

                  Stare down at hell

 

I curse the confusion,

         Embrace the madness

 

I question my sanity,

         Answer the insanity

 

I only hum in the daytime,

         But sing to the night

 

Searching for the clues

         Without a need to solve the mystery. 

Reviews

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Your writing is more inspiring, more wise. Love it.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much… I keep trying to improve on my soul and my writing.

[Lyn Anderson]

This is clever. A peak into how we all think sometimes -- external and internal melding together in our minds.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so very much,,, one of a humans biggest faults is thinking too much, at least for me.

[Frieda P]

Wow Dale, good one, you do have the grasp of this mystery by the kahunas. ;)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you Moonbeam, but not really, this mystery is a lot like women, the more I know them the less I understand.

[Frieda P]

That's the elegance of it, it's/we're a mystery for a good reason.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

life in stereo...it's a mystery...i'll just listen...no need to solve or understand...i like "answer the insanity"---

something to think about.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you so much Jacob, appreciate you taking the time to read and respond.

[Hitchhiker]

Yep. Taking questioning everything is healthy. Sorting it out is a formidable force, and understandingwhat you have learned is FANtastic!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much for your insight.

[Jennie Baron]

Outstanding poem. It speaks about the need to embrace life fully.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh wow, I am glad to hear that is what in sparks… thank you Jennie ;)