Basemeant

Basemeant

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
"

a senryu and yes I meant to spell the title that way.

"

 

Foundations crumble

When you forget just why you

Are building your house.


© 2015 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)



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SO MANY LIVE IN THE MOMENT..FORGETTING ABOUT THE FUTURE...

SOUND WRITE..

JAZZY

Posted 2 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

2 Years Ago

Thank you Jazzy.
J. J.  Nightingale

2 Years Ago

You are welcome Dale...................
Lovely senryu, and so true, easy to lose ones focus and wonder what the hell we are doing at times. Very relatable and also a reminder to just stop, breathe and think of the big picture. Well done, Can be difficult to pack a powerful message into so few words but so effective when done right. This one is done right.

Posted 2 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

2 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind review and feedback.
Deeply moving thoughts of buildings... of lives... of all things that matter.

Posted 2 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

2 Years Ago

Why thank you good sir.
short and sweet...wisdom well penned and shared...thank you...

Posted 2 Years Ago


~observant and wise words. The first feel of a cold breeze getting in through the cracks is a big dose of reality.~

Posted 2 Years Ago


"Foundations crumble
When you forget just why you
Are building your house."

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wow. I love it. So powerful as a message...Truly...:).........

Posted 2 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

2 Years Ago

Thank you kindly sir.
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

My pleasure, sir. Any time...:).....................
I like this Dale...and you are so right...nicely done...Rose :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

2 Years Ago

Why thank you Rose.
building houses on shifty foundations , yeah, they will always crack. Great job R&R. perfect count.

Posted 2 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

2 Years Ago

Thank you Corset for sharing your thoughts :)
Must never forget why we got together in the first place. You say it gently and beautifully, as always.

Posted 2 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much sweetie.

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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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I am a Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, D.. more..

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