Basemeant

a senryu and yes I meant to spell the title that way.

 

Foundations crumble

When you forget just why you

Are building your house.

Reviews

[J. J. Nightingale]

SO MANY LIVE IN THE MOMENT..FORGETTING ABOUT THE FUTURE...

SOUND WRITE..

JAZZY

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Jazzy.

[J. J. Nightingale]

You are welcome Dale...................

[April Child]

Lovely senryu, and so true, easy to lose ones focus and wonder what the hell we are doing at times. Very relatable and also a reminder to just stop, breathe and think of the big picture. Well done, Can be difficult to pack a powerful message into so few words but so effective when done right. This one is done right.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you for the kind review and feedback.

[An owl on the moon]

Deeply moving thoughts of buildings... of lives... of all things that matter.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you good sir.

[jeannemarie coulter]

short and sweet...wisdom well penned and shared...thank you...

[Relic]

~observant and wise words. The first feel of a cold breeze getting in through the cracks is a big dose of reality.~

[Sami Khalil]

"Foundations crumble
When you forget just why you
Are building your house."

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. I love it. So powerful as a message...Truly...:).........

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly sir.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure, sir. Any time...:).....................

[SyberRose]

I like this Dale...and you are so right...nicely done...Rose :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you Rose.

[Corset]

building houses on shifty foundations , yeah, they will always crack. Great job R&R. perfect count.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Corset for sharing your thoughts :)

[DIVYA]

Must never forget why we got together in the first place. You say it gently and beautifully, as always.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much sweetie.