I Want To Breathe You In

I Want To Breathe You In

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

 

I want to breathe you in

Until my breath

Smells like your skin

So I can share the scent

That reminds me

That love is truly life.


© 2016 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)



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There is a vivid beauty in the scent of Love, something that stirs and senses and the soul. You breathe that out so beautifully in this tender vision.

Posted 1 Year Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

1 Year Ago

Well said my poetic friend.
Love is truly life. Well-done poem in its brevity!

Posted 1 Year Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

1 Year Ago

Why thank you sweetie.
A brief yet powerful expression of love. Appreciated so much, dear Dale. ❤

Posted 1 Year Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

1 Year Ago

Thank you dear Divya... it don't take a lot of words when expressing love.
DIVYA

1 Year Ago

You are most welcome ☺
Sweet and passionate and revealing a poet's open heart. Great work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Awww..........Lovely .........nice....


Jazz

Posted 1 Year Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

1 Year Ago

Thank you Jazzy
J. J.  Nightingale

1 Year Ago

You are welcome....:)
Even with it being short it still is able to convey the love theme. Your idioms such as breathe in, shows how much love is in the writers heart for whom ever they are talking about. Good job.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

1 Year Ago

Why thank you very much.
beautiful and romantic, and a very strong sentiment -- I might have one suggestion -- consider taking out the of in the last line.

Posted 1 Year Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much for your review... always nice to hear from you.
Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

You are very welcome. always.
Sweet little vignette describing the way smells make connections very strong for some of us. Your words are brimming with love & affection in general, not only for the beloved in this tale.

Posted 1 Year Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

1 Year Ago

Thank you kindly golden girl.

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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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I am a Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, D.. more..

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