Sunryu

Sunryu

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
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As senryu... Funny fact, the text I had to type to post this was "heatable" LOL

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Warmth brings life anew

As wild seeds are brought to life

In mom’s shiny womb.


© 2017 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)



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The title is a flash of brilliance! To me, this is haiku becuz it's about nature (whereas senryu is about human nature) . . . but I still love the title becuz people interchange these words all the time. The most unusual part is the last line, as I had to think a bit to figure out why "shiny" . . .

Posted 4 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

4 Months Ago

You are right, but it could also be how you view the poem, Thank you so much for sharing your though.. read more
a perfect springtime poem, great positive energy and a sweet innocence.

Posted 6 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

6 Months Ago

Thank you Ana... a sweet innocence from me, that is unheard of :)
Ana Papaya

6 Months Ago

LOL. True! Must be a trap!
I like the last line- it is childlike, innocent, and happy. I see this poem as something a little child would enjoy.

Posted 6 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

6 Months Ago

I really like how you see it... thank you.
Spring forward as that stupid time change thing tells us. Nice work here.

Posted 7 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

7 Months Ago

Thank you kindly sir for all four reviews.
Kenneth The Poet

7 Months Ago

Not a problem at all. Your work was needed today.
This could go either was as perception warrants , mother as Gaia, could be argued as a haiku as well, aren't you the clever one :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

7 Months Ago

Well, thank you for thinking I am clever :)
So much coming alive here already with the warmth, and your words awaken joy in the soil and honor in every sacred mother.

Posted 7 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

7 Months Ago

Thank you sir.
Makes me think of new life, vigour, fertility and hope. A powerful, beautiful sunryu, dear Dale.

Posted 7 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

7 Months Ago

Thank you my sweet Divya

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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool



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I am a Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, D.. more..

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