Unholy Water

 

You have gotten burned

By what you thought was perfectly clear

to quench your hearts thirst

Because souls are the opposite of vampires

That gets burned by holy water.

Reviews

[DIVYA]

What looks pristine and pure can be so toxic sometimes...one must not judge by appearance alone...Appreciated much...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you dear sweet Divya... looks can be deceiving.

[Ayushi Jha]

A very strong poem. You are left with a sinking feeling towards the end . Applaudable. The style of this poem is intriguing in itself, very unique. Will read more :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you very much... glad that you liked it.

[emmajoy]

We all have our thoughts on how faith touches us.
Tis same as some loving the heat of Summer, others the crisp chill of Winter. Whichever, we feel something.

You so often make me think... not a bad thing!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you classy lady.

[Corset]

mmm, so souls are burned by unholy water and Ta.kill.ya will put you out of your misery? now now, Jesus drank the wine! My daughter has been watching all the near death and returned from death videos, she says all of the religions, Buddhists, Islamist, Hindu etc included claim to see Jesus when they die...and then return and convert ...what you make of that?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Sounds like she is a very intelligent lady like her mother.

[Corset]

awww, thanks :)

[Ana Papaya]

Ha! Very clever Cowboy!
hard to tell the difference between water and vodka until we taste it

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is a great analogy. Thank you.