Dreaming In Clear And Aqua

Dreaming In Clear And Aqua

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

 

When a mist lingers

Like a breath mint

In Mother Earth’s mouth

The bubbling brook

Becomes cool enough

To refresh the throat

Of all whom believe

In the not so secrets

That nature speaks of.

So let those that think

The sun is the only light

Dry up like dead bugs

On asphalt during summer’s noon,

I choose to listen to the moist lips

Of Mother Nature at midnight.


© 2017 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)



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Mother Nature has much to offer not just the sun. I love the last two lines.

Mother Nature at midnight can be a beautiful sight.

Posted 2 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

2 Months Ago

Thank you very much.
dear Dale... in the coolness of the night when moonlight embraces the earth and
crickets are full of mirth... we find the essence of life. "The moist lips of Mother Nature" is the early morning dew upon the morning glories blue...
truly, Pat p.s. soft and mellow poetry

Posted 2 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

2 Months Ago

Thank you very much for the lovely in-depth feedback.
Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

You are welcome... ♦️
I chose to listen to the moist lips Mother Nature at midnight that is beautiful

Posted 2 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

2 Months Ago

Thank you very much.
Very pretty! I love how you personified mother nature at midnight, listening to her moist lips ... that bubbling brook so refreshing to the soul. Bravo!

Posted 4 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

4 Months Ago

Why thank you so very much... so happy to hear you like it.
There is something so mystic and magical about the world at midnight. The movement of the dark life comes on like music. So beautifully expressed.

Posted 4 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

4 Months Ago

Thank you kindly good sir I love the magic of midnight.
A beautiful ode to the moon. We do often think of the Sun as our guiding light but there is beauty in the moon and the night. Really great imagery

Posted 4 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

4 Months Ago

Thank you Anna.
such a graphic contrast .. my mouth is parched and i want that brooks clear cold waters ...very enjoyable read and experience for me this morning ..perfect way to start the day actually! (tho the sun is arising;)
E.

Posted 5 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

5 Months Ago

Thank you again for a kind review of my work.
This is a beautiful piece of modern art , breath mints gave it a very powerful essence, seriously! I could taste it when I read it. In my line of work we call that a :"buzz" word, something that causes sensation in positive way. reading it sounded very sensual especially the last two lines, I was just thinking earlier that I love the sound of summer crickets.

Posted 5 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

5 Months Ago

Thank you sweetie for such wonderful feedback, I am thrilled that the poem had a positive effect on .. read more
Corset

4 Months Ago

you are very welcome hon :)
There is poetry in everything she has to offer, beautifully done :) x

Posted 5 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

5 Months Ago

Thank you kindly.
Perfect metaphors. Mother earth has so much to offer to those who appreciate her.

Posted 5 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

5 Months Ago

Indeed... so many don't realize the artwork that is Mother Nature.

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I am a Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, D.. more..

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