Doesn't Make Cents

Doesn't Make Cents

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

 

Blood money should be

Purchased on credit

Because layaway seems redundant

In a world where

Cash on delivery is

Always done a loan.


© 2017 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)



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Caustic, strong and obviously felt! Life has become commercial, corrupt and unforgiving.. especially the last part, 'giving'

Your writing always has been sharp, honest.. this is not exception, Dale.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Your words are the hard true and I agree my friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


Great punch to this poem and skillful wordplay! "Cash on delivery" the phrase of the day! Love it.

Posted 3 Months Ago


A fast and upfront payment method is always appreciated hon. Nowadays that matters most and more than anything else. Always love your thoughts.

Posted 3 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

3 Months Ago

Thank you hon... I cherish your opinions.
DIVYA

3 Months Ago

And I yours...
Makes you think about corporate greed and corruption. Look at the diamonds in Africa. That's why people should buy non-conflict diamonds

Posted 3 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

3 Months Ago

I agree whole heartedly. Thank you.
Poetic Beauty

3 Months Ago

You are welcome. You have been writing some great poetry
I'm no financial wizard, but I'll take your word for it! *wink! wink!* Always enjoy your word crafting & point of view!

Posted 3 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

3 Months Ago

Thank you kindly young lady.

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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool



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I am a Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, D.. more..

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