Learn To Walk Alone

Senryu + Senryu = Poem

Sometimes just one step

To the left is better than

Two steps to the right.

 

If you are confused

Do not make a move until

You can walk alone. 

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"Learn to walk alone"
Rebel with a cause"
"Sometimes just one step
To the left is better than two steps to the right."
Yes to stop and think, wait a see.. if a one feels ill at ease or unsure just wait.
"If you are confused
do not make a move until
You can walk alone."
Good point. It is easy to ask others for there opinion but they may not have the right answer.
"Walk alone when good counsel is sought and careful consideration made. Some life choices are just to important to be entered into lightly.
Good poem with a good instigator for thought.
Blessings,
Kathy

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I really love you interpretation of my poem. Thank you kindly.

[Deep]

few write hundreds of words and they fail to convey the meaning of their poem, and few have the skills to say everything in just two lines. you are the latter one. It's such a beautiful piece of writing.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I enjoyed this poem. I also agree with it! It is a good reminder!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly young lady.

[Angie Diane♥♥]

No problem!

[Terry L & Linda L Shuff]

Good advice for all, i consider this a Proverb.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you very much. That is quite the compliment.

[Ana Papaya]

Too many missteps in life can be prevented with a little patience and consideration.
Wise poem.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You said it Ana. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

[Laurierose]

Short and simple. That's how easy it should be to take those independent steps. However, things become difficult when those baby steps are moving in the opposite direction towards dependency. I love the font size for emphasis here. Great read.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Yes yes! That is true. We must learn to be independent but we should be sure of every step we make.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

So very true, thank you for stopping by.

[sette]

because over dependency is not a solution, we have to learn to walk alone at all cost

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are exactly right.