The Raven Or The Crow

One chases after

The tales of midnight,

The other follows

The spells of the witching hour,

But both do their best work

Making shadows in the moonlight.

One helps death become a reality

To those who are in denial,

The other protects life

When facing Forces

Darker than the night.

Though their wings are

Of The same color

They follow different paths.

Their wings may seem Interchangeable

To the human eye,

Yet neither wants to see the light.

When you look into the sky

Between sunset and sunrise

You’ll wonder on what side

Of Eternal life does the bird fly

With you in its sight.

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong and worthwhile words shared my friend.
"When you look into the sky
Between sunset and sunrise
You’ll wonder on what side
Of Eternal life does the bird fly
With you in its sight."
The above lines. I did like. You asked many great question in the poetry. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much. I am happy you enjoyed it.

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome my friend.

[light and ashes]

like being in the eye of the storm.......enigmatic

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[light and ashes]

You're welcome

[barleygirl]

Since I follow Native American teachings, I've always felt there wasn't much difference between these two similar totems. That's why I love how you came up with this unique distinction, very well expressed for clarity in your poem. Now I know the difference! *smile* Fondly, Margie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you Margie... this of course is my humble opinion based on what has been written or in movies based on these birds.

[LazerRays]

Aha! I was drawn by the title!I am pleased to see this poem. As a Poe lover, I am cheering about this! What splendid topic!
If Edgar Allan Poe could see this, I'm sure he'd be amused to see this. As I am happy too.
I'm sure Pluto agrees also

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Wow the ultimate compliment. Poe is my favorite writer so your comment has made me giddy. So glad you like it.

[LazerRays]

He's your favorite too??????YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awesome! :D
nemo me impune lacessit!!!! Forever!

[Vivian Gospel]

This is egar allen poeish. I like the parallels you draw between a raven and a crow. Do you miss any of them?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so very much. Poe is my favorite poet. Appreciate the feedback.