LOST

a repost

                                                                                                

Breathtaking eyes

            Seduces my attention

Burning red lips

            Caters to my taste

Tingling fingertips

            Touches my desire

Womanly curves

            Intoxicates my drive

Touching soul

            Feels the real me

Gentle heartbeat

            Shows mine life

 

Lost in this moment… Praying to never be found.

Lost in forever whenever you’re around.

Reviews

[Norma J. Jessee]

Lost in forever when you're around." What girl wouldn't want to hear those words whispered in her ear.
So romantic.

[Alysa]

So very romantic.
I love the ending.

[Brianna Brie]

Lost in this moment� Praying to never be found.
Lost in forever whenever you're around.

Sweet...what a gentle ending. The love can be felt.

[Dani California]

Beautiful, purely romantic poem.
There really isn't much more I can say about it....

It stands on that.

[emz]

Very warming poem.... love is such a deep feeling... you capture the essence fabulously here



x

[Midnight Rose ~*Anna Ro..]

Beautiful! Deep and touching poem. I loved the last two lines.

Marvelous write
~*Anna Rose*~

[Jane Doe]

I loved this poem. I really liked how you arranged the stanzas, that is very visually pleasing to me for some reason. The last two lines are especially fantastic! Another great write!

[undisguised]

Mmm have come back to read this a couple of times.
and as another has said..the last line truly does sum it all up.

thank you for sharing

[Erotic Goddess]

Lost in forever seems to me to be a great place to be. I am glad that you reposted this piece. It has a simple beauty to it that attracts the reader.

Love,
Stephanie