Twisted Mask (Thoughts Of A True Madman)

Inspired by my favorite book Phantom Of The Opera.

  

  

 

These catwalks have become

A sanctuary for my shadow

To roam free from torment

As I keep a steady eye

On the unsuspecting characters

In my twisted play.

 

How can those pitiful fools

Believe they own the stage

When it is I,

With my own sweat and blood

That made this place

What it is

What I want it to be.

 

Soon they will learn

Or it will be

Their blood

That will become

My lifeline.

 

The night is my only friend

For it is when my music

Takes flight

Blissfully echoing

Through the corridors

Sung by my greatest creation…

 

Christine… the one who will love me forever

Because she owes me…

As do the rest of these ungrateful fools.

 

Wait who is this insolent boy

Who courts my lady’s affections

Oh when will they learn

That to betray me

Means the hangman’s noose.

 

This cannot be…

How can she be?

It isn’t possible.

Her love belongs to

 

ME!!

 

This will never happen

For I won’t let it be…

If he wants her so bad

And she desires him

Then the choice is clear.

 

If I can't capture her heart

Then I must steal her…

 

Oh and let her charming hero

Come after her and he’ll be the martyr

In my torture chamber.

 

Someday they will learn

 

Yes someday they will see…

That this is my world

They are living in

And if they refuse to bow to my religion

Then they can burn in my hell.

 

Consider me nothing more than

A Phantom…

 

When in reality I am

 

The GOD of this Opera House.

 

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

Yes someday they will see

That this is my world

They are living in

And if they refuse to bow to my religion

Then they can burn in my hell.



Wow~ this blew me away~Aptly Titled~Twisted Mask of... this is an Awesome!!! and Powerful piece~

What madness in thoughts truly lurks

behind the Twisted Mask of the Phantom~ A power-packed write taking the reader there

into the madness of the Phantom's world~THanks, Dale, for submitting this skillfully penned poem

to the Masquerade Ball Contest~

Fran Marie

[SHEEMA HUQ]

very spooky, all in all very well executed!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you, Phantom Of The Opera is my favorite all time book.

[Norma M Sutton]

I've not read the book, but have seen one of the older film interpretations. Loneliness truly can drive one to insanity. Very well written.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes it can... this also shows how being picked on and different can also do that.

[Marie]

Oh of course; I was thinking of "Phantom of the Opera" almost as soon as I started reading this poem. It sounds like some kind of unholy music...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is what I based it on... It is my all time favorite book.

[Divya]

Never seen an opera but liked the story and the drama a lot!
Interestingly written.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I have seen the musical twice, but the book Phantom Of The Opera is my favorite book of all time. The only book I more then once.

[Dayran]

It could have been the words of a Dionysus. Great job bringing that out for the readers' preview. Have a nice day Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much sir.

[Circe]

a thrilling piece to read.... i love the story of the phantom of the opera... it always leaves me feeling devastated and nostalgic and regretful.... i suppose when you really get into the psyche of the characters you feel what they feel.... like this perspective from the phantom himself, this trapped tragism... being burned by beauty and hope and love... but wanting it all the same and not knowing how.. so tormented and lonely that he has become a ghost..... but not without magic..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much... The Phantom Of The Opera is my favorite book of all time. The only book I have read more then once. Even seen the play twice on Broadway... it is more tame then the book but it is also great. It was fun to try and get into the character.

[Hayley]

Oh, yes, I love your interpretation! I absolutely adore the Phantom of the Opera and think it's interesting to see life through the Phantom's eyes because he is so often pegged as the "bad guy," when really he is suffering from a fate that is questionably the making of his own faults.
I like the emotion as well; it makes this piece special and authentic. :)

[Priscilla Moore]

Oh! And I do see the connection with the Phantom of the Opera. I just couldn't help but personalize it:)

[Priscilla Moore]

This one has me taken back a few steps, where my worries rise as I hear the voice that speaks these words and it is he who has won out in the end. A very realistic poem full of the true emotion that is felt when love becomes overwhelming and the one caught in the middle is just a pawn.
Great right, even if this may have seemed a negative review, please know that it is not. You are very well versed, a talented writer indeed.

[Phibby Venable]

Dale, this moves with such drama and style and I love the
insights, all that is seen through the eyes of the phantom.
Wonderful.