You Can't Beat The Clock

Inspired from something said in a movie today.

  

 

  

Destined dreams become pale

in the deepest crater

so come away from the dark side

of the moon

to see the glorious reflections

of your bright mind.

 

In your head

seeing may be believing

but believing what you don’t see

Shouldn’t become fiction.

 

Remember you’re never too old

to dream

and never too young to die.

 

Though you can’t beat the clock

you sure can challenge life.

Reviews

[Wildfleour]

darkside - dark side

n the moon -- "n" the moon?

Shouldn't -- shouldn't

Okay, my little nitpicking aside, I want to know, what movie was it that inspired you so?

You can't beat the clock but you can make every tick and every tock count as much as possible.

An interesting write for you Cowboy. You seem to be expanding your writing horizons lately and I am liking it! :)

[Ladysue]

wow, this speaks profoundly. I love the last two lines especially...Excellent my friend...

[Tracie Skarbo]

Oh wow... love this...The way you make us sit and ponder your profoud insight is awesome! I hope evryone who reads this gets to challenge life! Excellent job!

[Theresa]

A great message. I especially love the lines:
"seeing may be believing
but believing what you don’t see
Shouldn’t become fiction."
Love it and couldn't agree more.

[Sorry Infamous]

Interesting. Has me still thinking about it... may have to read again and again.

[ANNA]

You have the quote in here. I like the message you sended out to all of us! Very true and positive. Thank you for your awesome message!

much love n respect,
Anna Banana...Know that I see that what everyone is calling on here
Is that good or bad!? lol

[just is]

Remember you're never too old
to dream
and never too young to die.

Though you can't beat the clock
you sure can challenge life.

So very true!
I love these lines here.
This is one amazing write.
I really liked this one alot.
Then again I like all your writes.
You're so talented.
This is one of my favorites I think from you.
Those lines are priceless

[Jet Lag]

time certainly seems to be the foe more often than the friend, si?

[Emily B]

Old Captain Hook had a thing about clocks. Something about that infernal ticking, I suppose.

[SPINNING ON that dizzy ..]

I was trying to find a part of this I liked more than the next.... could not do it.... like it all - reminds me of the wisdom signs you could see in a row going down the road.... very cool - putting in favs.

Kath

[Fantasyfairy]

Life is a challenge for us all and one we must all face alone, so why not do it with a smile and kicking a*s along the way?? Love it. XX