Confused

Confused

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
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A repost from the great delete

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Love can beak your heart

Leave you hollow inside.

I want it.

 

Love can bring joy and happiness

Making your burdens light.

I don’t want it.

 

Love will mess with your emotions

And you’ll wish you were dead.

I want it.

 

Love can inspire you to great things

Giving you the strength to fight.

I don’t want it.

 

Love embrace me,

Love set me free.

© 2008 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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Guess it's the old adage.. 'better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all'

Imagine what it would be like to go through life never loving or being loved.. even memories after things have faded can make you shiver in your shoes.

I understand what you've written, created, so very finely... the poem is very well crafted and maybe, maybe a little bittersweet but, the sweet's the stronger!

Thank you for sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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now all you need it a picture of a daisy with some of the pedals plucked out.
A very nice play on images with this Internal discussion

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow...I couldn't of said it better myself. Many people have an internal conflict. They want love and need love. Yet, many of us don't know how to receive love or give it for the matter. Excellent thoughts to ponder.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Yes, love certainly presents the heart with both sides of the coin. Good piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


love's mystery and endless possibility for pleasurable pain is the love we love

Posted 13 Years Ago


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love is all things to all people, sometimes we get confused by the feelings associated with love..pain, regret, loss but they are not love..

Posted 13 Years Ago


Just wanted to stop back by once again...this piece was so fun to read I just had to comment again! ahha

Cheers,lea

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OXYMORON
Don't you think? HA! I like this one! So crazily unique! He loves me, he loves me not, He loves me....oh oh well! Cheers,lea

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dale, I hear ya, its like wanting what recks with us instead of whats good for us. I love the poem very much, you are a great writer, ----mishel

---ps. very much enjoy both your poetry and your stories, :P


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The many diversities and aspects of love-some that we appreciate and some that we can do without and yet each one has it's place in making us grow. Your last two lines sums it all up:

Love embrace me,

Love set me free.

Well said, my friend! :-)



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well almost sounded like one of my 4am rambles on first read, BUT, then with a second and third read it just really says the truth, love can be confusing, there is no doubt about that! But would it really be worth giving it up, Not for me... Good write my friend. I like the way it "fights" with itself so to speak. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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