I Think Cupid Needs Glasses

I Think Cupid Needs Glasses

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
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just something fun for Valentine's Day

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What’s the deal with cupid?

Don’t get me wrong

He does some wonderful work

But sometimes I think

It’s time for glasses.

Shooting arrows

That hit the wrong mark,

I mean what is he?

A major league umpire.

Or maybe sometimes

He has one to many drinks,

That can happen

When you have

So much responsibility.

Maybe that baby with wings

Needs to take lessons

From Johnny Appleseed.

Or maybe he is just anxious

To spread some much love

To a world needing it.

What ever the case may be

Cupid sure has many stray arrows

That has caused a lot of pain

Which the world doesn’t need.

So little buddy boy

Let’s get that aim tried and true

So you can stop putting

People’s eye’s out

And making love blind.

© 2009 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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Oh, a great take on the big mistakes we make in love!! I have sure had my share of them!!! smiles
Cute, Dale....really cute, and TRUTHFUL!! Cupid needs to have his glasses changed, or zap off the rose color tinting.
Something sure does interfere with his good judgment at times...maybe, he's had too much Valentine's Day candy, and has the wings weighted down.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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dear Dale… you have Good Advice.. we should think Twice and wear Bi-Focals and leave shooting Arrows to the Young Jet-Setters… Amen… Pat

Posted 2 Months Ago


So pleased you posted this older write Dale. A different way of looking at Cupid. He certainly doesn’t hit the target with all his arrows does he? He probably has alot of poor shots :) A fun look at Valentine’s Day. Hope yours is a good one.

Posted 1 Year Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

1 Year Ago

thank you so much. glad you liked it.
Ahh, but maybe the arrow will be a soft feathery one and hit the right mark eventually...we can all remove the splinters from previous arrows...and maintain hope xo

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Years Ago

You are very wise magick heart, thank you.
I always got the drunk Cupid. Gave me woman I wanted. Not what I deserved. I enjoyed the poem. The day of love. I need to spend money on wife. Thank you for sharing the entertaining poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Years Ago

Thank you sir, always love to look at the humorous side of things.
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

It is sometime better and you are welcome. Better to laugh than cry.
This is fantastic, you got a good laugh out of me. Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Years Ago

Thank you… always glad when I make people laugh.
It's like a porquoi tale on how love became blind. He sometimes shoots us right through the head and we still walk around but our brains are broken. Loved the whole thing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

I love that part bout the broken brain. Thanks.
I mean, right?? Tomorrow is my 12 year anniversary. I know what Cupid was thinking back then, and he hit the nail right on the head, but...that nail fell out of the wall for me over a decade ago *laugh* Now I'm sitting here with someone I have nothing in common with except a 9 year old kid...Life...You are spot on with this one, Dale. Great work (despite the two typos xD) (lines 11 and 19) ;-) hey...I'm still kimmer xoxo

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much hon for the review… it is good to see you again.
KAOlmsted

10 Years Ago

My pleasure and back at ya...
Haha...good one Cowboy..I'm sure theres times when people want to strangle the little b*****d. Personally I think he has an ego problem. Thinks he knows better then everyone else. Lol.... ;-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

You may be right with that ego problem. They gave him to much power.
Ha! Yes, I agree that Cupid needs to work on his aim. He probably has a quota... Fun poem for this day, Dale!

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Thank you, just having a little fun with the chubby baby.
A love that is blind doesn't depend on physical beauty and the sexual drive. That however may raise the spectre of morality. A novel idea Dale, in these times ... perhaps the word morality is too strong ... perhaps we could look at ethics or decorum or conventions in social conduct. An issue of concern certainly in affairs of love.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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