The Tide Brings Me Calmness

  

I walk along the shorelines

In my mind

My feet sink into the sand

Leaving an impression,

Like the words you said…

 

HARSH like the currents

Slapping my heart

Like a rock formation

Needing the attention

No matter the sacrifice.

 

I feel the undertow calling…

Wanting me to walk out

And drown in the loneliness

Calling the ocean floor

My new home…

 

Then came the miracle sounds,

The tides whispering words

Of hope and inspiration

And suddenly my soul was calm…

 

And you are the tide

That brought my heart ashore

And saved my life with

CPR from your soul.

Reviews

[!FireCracker!]

Now that's just sweet! i like using the ocean (sea, beach, what-have-you) as representation of people, you know this, because it just works. you can take so much from the natural wonder and apply it to life, people, love, anything really. And here you've molded and crafted this into the heart- and it's flawless! i'm rambling i know it- but i like to talk about things i adore, and this quallifies!

[Anastasia Starlena]

What a beautiful calming piece. I am not sure what is up so many of my dear friends are upset. Why do people have to hurt others. This is a beautiful piece. I loved the calm imagery.

[Cherry Berry]

Beautifully penned as always. I love your romantic style and out look. Well done.
xox
Cherri

[Bud]

This is an inspirational, emotionally stirring, and down right Excellent romantic poem! Outstanding!

[BABSIE BEE]

This is brill. I love the ending " CPR from your soul ".
Talented wee cowboy are'nt you ?? Tee Hee
BBXX

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

ahh that was most beautiful....you are so good! x0x0x00xx0x0x still love me?? te he he

[Ladysue]

WOW cowboy, this was sensational. The imagery was fantastic. The flow wonderful and the content extraordinary. It started off strong and kept going. My favorite lines....

The tides whispering words
Of hope and inspiration
And suddenly my soul was calm�

So serene and beautiful these lines. I love this piece. Outstanding!!!!

[Katherine Wyatt]

What a wonderful piece....I love it.. Such great imagery and such wonderful touching words!

[Ellen Hammond]

Beautiful imagery I can relate to easily. Living beside the ocean, I also tend to use metaphors derived from intimacy with the tides, raging storms, and the calm flow that follows. Great job!

[Fran Marie]

The tides whispering words

Of hope and inspiration

And suddenly my soul was calm�

The oceans offer such soothing sounds and serene atmospere
calming the human mind and spirit~ THanks for sharing this lovely piece
wonderfully penned as always~Fran