Surreal Fairytale

Surreal Fairytale

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

  

Misty eyes notice a dwarf

Dancing under a purple sunrise

Like he was a princess.

The princess dressed in white

Walks down the middle of the street

Like walking down the aisle

To an everafter wedding.

Her gallant knight sells her

At the last minute for magic beans

To feed his horse in hopes

Of making him a unicorn

When all the noble steed wants

Is to be the mouse

With so many friends.

Yet the mouse sits and cries

While watching the dwarf dance

Wishing to be his partner.

 


© 2009 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)



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Dale.....I am most certain this is not just a "fairy tale", but a tale of settling for seconds...compromises..., change of roles, unmet expectations somewhere along the way! The poor mouse in the end has to sit and watch, though he wanted to be so much more! Your way of telling this fable/moral is unique, and flowing from the magic kingdom with creativity! Well done!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I don't know what the heck this means, but I love the uninhibited way your message keeps morphing into a different whimsical scenario over & over until it feels like a perfectly reasonable storyline (kinda like Alice in Wonderland) *smile* Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Months Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

6 Months Ago

Glad you like the whimsey of the poem... I think how ever you interpret it is right... but my inten.. read more
barleygirl

6 Months Ago

Oh yeah, now I see it. Excellent message & point of view . . . so true!
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Wow! I find the way this is narrated extremely unique, intelligent and earnest. I think we don't look inwards often enough. It takes a long time for us to understand that we need to focus on self-actualization rather than wanting to turn into someone we're not. In a sense, this is, therefore, a very poetic description of an identity-crisis-chaos. Superbly written! It's a piece that might appear to be simple but exposes extremely complex issues relating to one's identity and how one attempts to define or re-define it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the feedback.
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5 Years Ago

~ you're very welcome...
This is surreal...magic and mystical...

Posted 5 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

5 Years Ago

Thank you... triple threat.
We always aspire for something other than what we have, never waiting to appreciate the beauty of what we could have. This sad but a reality and so touching!
Fairy tales are not 'happily ever after'.

Posted 5 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

5 Years Ago

You are so correct sweets... instead of appreciating what we have we look for what we don't eventual.. read more
ProseRose

5 Years Ago

Wish good sense would prevail in time...
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

5 Years Ago

Amen to that :)
Always searching..always wanting things that are so close and yet so far away.. I've been sold for magic beans one time to many lol..x

Posted 5 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Oh Dale, love :)
This is beautiful and so original :) You have a heart of gold, you know that?
I love the stance of this piece..your surreal vision of it and such yearning I feel in it also...beautiful work
xx

Posted 6 Years Ago


Everyone always wants to be someone or something else and rarely do they realize that there are those who wish to be them. We all should be thankful for what we have and who we are because you never know what it is like to walk in another shoes and hold there secrets in life. Inspiring write my friend.

Posted 7 Years Ago


There's a serious circling and interconnecting going on in this fairytale like poem. Everyone wanting something and not really getting it. A very clever & fun poem!

Posted 7 Years Ago


The mystery of life. Few people appreciate their life and situations. I like the twist of this poem. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is definitely one twisted fairytale but it is a reminder that things aren't always what they seem. There may be hidden feelings and wants deep down inside of people and that life is always changing and that no fairytale is perfect. Great write my friend.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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