I'm Amazed

I'm Amazed

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

  

I don’t know what to say,

I am at a loss for words

Which is rare in my case.

 

The more I know you

The more I am amazed

To find how life has been

So unkind to you.

 

Especially all the guys

Who captured your heart

Only to foolishly let it escape

When failing to guard it

With loving care.

 

How can someone not sacrifice

To have a love more pure

Then what even heaven embodies.

 

I’d go through hell to hunt the devil

If it meant protecting it from harm.

 

How can someone not get lost

In your passion that’s as deep and magical

As the Brazilian Rainforest.

 

I know once I entered it

I’d never want to be found.

 

How can someone not suffocate

Looking into your eyes

And seeing beauty naturally breathtaking.

 

I’d being living just to die

And let your lips be my last rites.

 

Every time it crosses my mind

I have to start to wonder

If I am the fool…

Then I simply answer

No way…

It’s the rest of them.

© 2009 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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Dear Dale!
You express such devotion, passion, compassion, loyalty, and commitment that I am amazed at the depth of feeling inside you!...bold and on fire feelings!
This gal had better grab you up....and fast! If she doesn't...she is really missing out on one great guy!!
Please don't ever consider yourself to be the fool!! No way!
Hugs and Love,
Sheila

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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OMG. I don't know who you wrote this for but I'm keeping it. wow..... This is going on my profile. Wut?!?!
This is magical!


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful words, beautiful emotions, beautifully formatted. You're an artist who paints in words, Dale.

' I'd being living just to die / And let your lips be my last rites. ' - now that's special, that's real love.


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awww, this is so precious. Beautiful as always. Hugs

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A most powerful piece with the emotions of indepth love, compassion and devotion

well donE!!!~ Fran

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is amazing, passionate, loyal. Love the way it flows. Completely lost in the words reading it. Thanks so much for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this fills blank space with implicit meaning, and loving audible silence.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerfully vivid and expressive of love so devoted; so strong. This so beautifully communicates the depth of true love, so few ever find...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have a wonderful way for capturing feelings of the heart and this is no exception. A little reminiscent of the McCartney song of the same title, it speaks the one same truth � when the heart sings we better all be listening.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think its wonderful to see somebody as truly and completely as you see her. Its taking in everything - the good, the bad, the difficult. This is a really great poem. I'm sure that she loved it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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