Without Hesitation (No Reservations)

Without Hesitation (No Reservations)

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

 

  

You say you can’t see,

See what I see…

Maybe it’s because

You don’t try,

Your unique womanhood

Makes you beautiful on the inside

And your natural femininity

Makes you sexy all over.

I’ve never seen anything

More stunning

Then you in the glow

Of the bedside lamp,

Your face bare and pure.

I’m always left

Astounded how you find simple solutions

To things I found complicated

All my life…

And how you open my eyes to things

I have been voluntarily blind to.

They say you should never lay it all on the line,

Treat love like a game…

I see that as the quickest way to lose

Everything (in my case you)…

So truth be known

My heart is so complete

With you in it

That every beat feels

Like a kiss from your sweet lips.

Without hesitation,

No reservations

I am yours.

© 2010 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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a simple statement of unconditional love, what I love is that it is simple... that is how love should be!! I love this beyond words...... I may have said this in the past but todate??? MY FAVORITE LOVE POEM OF YOURS!!.... right from your soul!!! lucky women.. :-)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Another beautiful glimpse into the heart and mind of a true romantic. Nicely done; a piece any woman would love to receive.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the simplicity and honesty that drips from this poem. It also is gentle and sweet. You are such a romantic cow boy! Kudos

Posted 13 Years Ago


wonderful words and insight! lucky wife!

Posted 13 Years Ago


When a man feels so much for a woman that he can write such wonderful words, it's special; you have to really cherish this kind of love .. return it at least two-fold. Feelings like these is like floating on magical cloud number nine - and the dizzines up there is oh so natural!

These words are magical: ' And how you open my eyes to things ~ I have been voluntarily blind to.'


Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow…….
Who is this lucky lady……..?
I wonder……
A great work…….


Posted 13 Years Ago


Boy, Im eating this up! I am always in awe of the romantic writes that come from within you. Great work Dale :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ah, what a frightening and wonderful thing when you reach the end of your reservations and give into it completely, recognizing it as truth. This is gorgeous! I believe I'm nearing this scary/beautiful place again. I hope this comes from your recent experience. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


first off, I suck a reading cursive. An easier font would have been nice, but still I really like this poem, It is really sweet and who ever (if anyone) you wrote it for would really like it

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

True unconditional love, ahh! I love this. Especially the last few lines. When people find a love like this, hold on tight- because it may never happen again. Amazingg job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

simply beautiful :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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