Room Without A View

 

A white satin sheet

Drapes perfectly over

The empty bed.

 

Red curtains closed tight

Accent the undisturbed

Room’s mood.

 

A single candle flickers,

Clinging to the polished dresser

With molten wax.

 

The slightest breeze

Drifts under the locked door

To keep the silence company.

 

She sits alone in the dark closet

So she can understand

What it all means.

Reviews

[no sun]

what a great write that probably most writers can relate to. i can. excellent work!

[Priscilla Moore]

Ah! I've sat in my closet once, to listen to silence in a house full of echos...
A fabulous poem!

[imagination101]

I like it! Love suspence and mystery! Felt like I was watch it all unfold right before my eyes! Excellent job, Dale!

[Lovely Lady]

WOOOO!!!! Mysterious and blue... I love it... and always wanting more! kisses~
~lovely♥lady♥poetess~

[Lily Mae]

She waits with white satin sheets and red curtains... passion and purity mixed.. Candles and molten wax and sitting alone in the closet...waiting for the show to begin.... I feel her in a strong way... excellent write...xo

[Marie Harrison]

Oh...this is dark and mysterious
Nice!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Last verse is killer.. Beautiful sad and lonely poem ..

Chloe

[Chris G. Vaillancourt]

a well composed and crafted piece of work

[Rossen]

You have painted a scene that clearly sets the mood for the final stanza
enjoyed the skill and warmth this poem is a gem, a favorite,
Rossen

[Neva Flores - Changeful..]

Oh wow! Such imagery you have painted here........makes me think deeply..