Hard Boiled Lesson(Cracking A Smile)

cracking a smile

  

If I had feet of clay

I could walk on eggshells

Without making a sound.

That is why I wear boots,

Giving my steps purpose

While teaching the chicken

A valuable lesson.

Reviews

[The Cobra Lounge]

Hardy har har. You are not only funny, but a wise man indeed. Clever work!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Cool I am a double threat, thank you.

[The Cobra Lounge]

of course. lol

[Relic]

haha, the chicken will remember you and your boots for a long time. Good one.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

haha I hope so, LOL

[TL Boehm]

OH YES! love this.

[Lily Mae]

I love this for so many reasons :) xo

[anne p murray- Not New ..]

Absolutely sublime msg. here with a pinch of satire and a tablespoon of wit ;)

[Natalie C]

He he he made my day.

Brilliantly funny, my friend. With a hint of ironic wisdom wrapped inside this well constructed piece.
Thanks for the smile!!

[angelink]

Cool poem, funny but with a good lesson underneath.

[Priscilla Moore]

Now as I sit smiling, a giggle escapes my lips... I too wear boots and they are my sturdy imprints upon the ground that has always been unsteady. I do not tread lightly.... I stomp! I love to see another who fears not to stomp with me in boots!:)
Fabulous pick me up for the day! Thank you!

[Emma Joy]

Laughing, thinking how you've done a little mixing of quotes or whatever and come up with a lesson for not only the chicken but your reviewers! Have a cartoon spread wide across my mind now. Purr poise?

[PerlySunflower]

I cracked a smile when I read the title...then had a good laugh while reading the poem....walking on eggshells...teaching the chicken a lesson....like that...
Can't help but laugh a little with the bit of wisdom