Sweet Temptation

I got a sweet tooth. Just a fun senryu

 

All it will take is

One slice of that pie for me

To beg for seconds.

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Ahh and who's pie might that be lmao off love the play on words here

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

A man does not eat and tell ;)

[Poetic Beauty]

Very untrue they do like to brag from time to time Lil love ya sweety lmao

[Renée J. Martin]

lol ! Very cute !

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks, not really my artistic side, was having fun on that one.

[lynn]

Lol

[PerlySunflower]

Such a clever and fun read...(senyru) Just one slice....well done

[Elisa Laura]

That is hauntingly hungry Dale :D you're a wolf in here...

[Stacey Watts]

I like this makes me a little hungry but very fun all the same. Well written on so many levels.

[Ed Hart]

i've never been able to understand why they don't just give you two pieces to begin with...oh, whatever does Miss Joy imply...some people need to go to meetings

[Emma Joy]

Methinks you weren't thinking 'pie' when you wrote this, Sir knight! A fun and clever senryu, nonetheless!

[MELODY CARNEY aka Kimbe..]

Ahhhh... simple words that mean many things. Whatever sir do you imply?...smile.
Very nice.

[Robbie]

Do you realize how many calories are in a slice of pie?! Seconds would kill it for me! Gotta watch the figure...being summer and all... Okay, maybe a bite. ;)
Love this! Fun Senryu indeed!