The Silence

The Silence

A Poem by Katherine S.
"

Just a quick poem I wrote.

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The silence,
Is what keeps me sane.
The very same silence,
That makes you crazy.

I don't need to hear your words,
They'll only hurt me more.
But that's what you want,
Is to tear me apart.

I'll put on a pretty smile,
And fake happiness.
But if you were to look inside my soul,
You'd see my decayed hopes and dreams.

You were once the sole source,
For all my happiness.
Now you're the one,
Who makes me die inside.

I know you're proud of your work,
I'm your best wreck so far.
But so very soon that will change,
I'll be nothing but a memory.

A memory,
That I'll make sure tortures your mind.
A memory,
That will burn inside you and stay.

I'll make sure,
You felt everything I felt.
And I'll make sure,
That all you have is the silence.

The very same silence,
That kept me sane,
Will be the very same silence,
That makes you fade away tonight.


© 2013 Katherine S.



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A strong poem with a strong promise. But the beauty of the flow and the transitions across words is what I found intriguing ! Gud job!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Katherine S.

2 Years Ago

Thank you!
This really captured me in the moment! Wonderful job painting this picture for your readers!

Posted 2 Years Ago


This reads like a dangerous promise.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wow... I must admit that you paint the silence treatment quite beautifully. Just so you know it hurts like ....

Posted 2 Years Ago


This has to be one of the most intelligent pieces I have read. its epic.
very nicely written,

Posted 2 Years Ago


yashmita13

2 Years Ago

where did all this dark inspiration come from??
Katherine S.

2 Years Ago

I can't remember my inspiration for this poem, but usually inspiration strikes me at random and I wr.. read more
yashmita13

2 Years Ago

thats very lucky
The starting and the ending makes me surprised reading this poem, no matter what. Everything's so real, so cool ..and yeah, silence makes us crazy ;) Well done, may be am getting addicted to your stuffs, Hope to read your all stuffs soon :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well the image and wording say a great deal.



Nice

Posted 3 Years Ago


Katherine S.

3 Years Ago

Thanks. :)
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Mia
That picture will be responsible for my nightmares tonight! I’m not sure whether you meant it the way I saw it…I like the way the ‘victim’ gets strength and in deciding to make the ‘villain’ suffer the roles are reversed. Very dark but I’m certain you meant it to be that way!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Katherine S.

4 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
This write makes me damn crazy and attracts me to read again and again and again. i liked this write but i loved it too from my heart.100/100 :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Katherine S.

4 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
Dark and terrifying. Well done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Katherine S.

4 Years Ago

Thanks. :)

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Added on February 26, 2013
Last Updated on February 26, 2013
Tags: silence, shh, hurt, pain

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Katherine S.
Katherine S.

Pittsburgh, PA



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