Breeze (Haiku)

Breeze (Haiku)

A Poem by Katherine S.
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This is my first time trying a haiku, I'm experimenting with my writing.

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Breeze blowing through me.
My bones begin to quiver.
I love this weather.


© 2017 Katherine S.



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Sweet haiku about winter.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I like it. It has a nice touch to it!
I think it has potential!
(I was wondering if you wanted to read my story called The Blonde Girl? I think you would like it a lot.)
keep up the great work!

C. Lee Battaglia

Posted 2 Years Ago


Nicely done. I love cold weather. Feels fresh.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lovely try... your good at writing haiku's either.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Katherine S.

3 Years Ago

Thank you.
Simple but effective. If you close your eyes after reading this you can almost feel the wind. :D

Posted 3 Years Ago


Katherine S.

3 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
Ezra Kaossed

3 Years Ago

You're Welcome!!
I too love winter. To me it is one of the most lovely times of the year. Short, but nice write :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Katherine S.

3 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
Moon

3 Years Ago

You are welcome
I like it. You kept to the nature theme without even mentioning the months that pertain to it. I'm gettin a shiver now just thinkin about it. Brrrr. Nice write.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Katherine S.

3 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
Beautifully written and spot on the subject. Wrap your blanket...

Posted 3 Years Ago


Katherine S.

3 Years Ago

Thanks. :)
Deep. To quiver is to shake as to love is to hold close. A question is left of with this poem that need not be answered but to rather make the reader wonder. Good write in three short lines.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Katherine S.

3 Years Ago

Thank you! :)

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Added on January 3, 2014
Last Updated on January 19, 2017
Tags: fall, haiku, breeze, weather, leaves, winter, poem, wind, leaf

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Katherine S.
Katherine S.

Pittsburgh, PA



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