This is it.

This is it,
this is goodbye.
I hope to god,
I can f*****g fly.

I've reached the end,
And You're too late.
Everyone still thinks I can bend,
But it really is my fate.

The roughness of a rope,
The sting of a blade.
Ive lost all hope,
I won't stop until I have been remade.

A better me you will never see,
I have lost all that was once part of me.
All I want to do is bleed,
Never again do I wish to feed.

Reviews

[Crifa]

Ahh yet another great poem by the amazing Anthony Q Armstrong...I feel as though you redirect your pain well but not well enough because I will put money on the fact that you still felt this way after writing it. Keep working at it and I hope you feel better. Remember you NEVER give up on life. No matter what happens you DO NOT give up on life.

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

I honestly do still feel like this, but writing it out helped; and knowing that people are there to care for me makes it even better.

[Crifa]

Well we are here just a "Send Message" button away

[Toni Blackerby]

this is one of my fav. poems. i love it anthony

[Grace Catherine C.]

very angry,very good, very angry

[Rhea752]

ahh, we'll always be here. the cool thing about writerscafe is we're not just here to write we're here to support in any way we can. Keep Writing Anthony Well Done :D

[Bats In The Belfry]

Tense emotional imagery conveyed through well strung words. Great job! Writing helps me when i feel this way too. Hugs!

[♪Barklight♪]

Well writen.

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

thank you :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

This was so dark and beautifully written. Truly a good job Anthony, your very talented
God Bless

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

This is what most of mine consist of. Poems I mean, most of my POEMS consist of.

[Lost in Wonderland]

yeah, alot of my poems fit into a common subjust (though they arent all on here)

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

I have maybe another 200 poems that aren't on here.

[Lost in Wonderland]

oh man! I don't have that many haha. but thats cool, I love writing random lines or poems down (especially when im in a really borig class -_- haha)

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

Always :) (!^.^!)

[Lost in Wonderland]

haha yep! way better than learninh psh stupid learning e.e haha :P

[Lost in Wonderland]

(jkaaaaay)

[afra]

so dark ...its exactly the way i feel right now ....hope you feel better ....well done

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

We all feel like this at one point in our lives, me more than others. But not everyone has a perfect life... and now mine is even worse... :(

[afra]

awww dont be sad buddy ...you will be okay ...if you ever need me you can message me okay ?

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

okay.