Truth Hurts

(*For L.A.W.*) You know me, and I you. Just a small favor, pretend you never knew me. Life will be better for you and him. Sinserly, Lost Soul.

Destructive are his intentions,

That he has planned for you.

Usind and abusing,

He will soon do.

 

He has done it before,

And then he will leave you.

Crying on the cold, hard floor.

 

He says he likes you,

He says he loves you.

All it means, is that,

He wants to screw you.

 

Be happy,

Be lucky.

Be proud,

And be loud.

 

You're young,

You're in love,

It might last,

But in the end,

You will get stung.

 

We love you,

As friends,

And one,

Much, much more.

 

Trust if you want,

You've been warned.

It's your physical beauty.

That is all that he want you for.

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

I've read the first review here and I don't know what to say actually I just read this.

well, I understood your poem and what you wanted to say here. Feelings have been fundamental to us after all (:

And doing some eye openers are also one thing that a writer should do (:

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

Well thank you, I try :P

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome and thanks for adding me to your friends (:

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

It was no problem

[Rhianne Ney]

(:

[Toni Blackerby]

We're did this come from Anthony?

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

something i wrote for my best friend, now my girlfriend, about the boyfriend she had at the time, and i hit everything spot on pretty much in saying what he was going to do to her

[Toni Blackerby]

Well it's fantastic and it's great ur still as good as ever