Candy Kisses

Raindrops and lollipops

Ice-cream and soda shops

 

Two for tea and tea for two

No other love will ever do

 

Sharing plans, dreams, and wishes

Eyes that smile all the while, as we do the dishes

 

When your eyes meet mine, I feel so fine

It's just you for me, and me for you

 

No other love will ever do

Oh honey, I love you so

 

Oh honey, here we go

Sneaking sweet candy kisses

Just between Mr. and Mrs.

Reviews

[Solst Rapture]

"No other love will ever do"------

"The wisdom of the heart speaks louder than the mind- the heart longs for love, the mind longs for heart"

. My deepest love cannot be severed and despite other wise bestowals, I am not sure I should be searching for my guide alone- she is as a mother, daughter, lover, friend and person for whom I carry the heaviest burdens- the deepest sentiments and the desire to be what I never trusted I could show.

This is such a wonderful image of two kindred spirits basking in their besotted love for one another, while sitting under the umbrella tree. The rain gently pours down, soaking the land with life. Beside that tree lives the memory of me leaning over to you and falling in love for the first time. Today is different. today I am watching the two newly entwined destinies...Am I missing something- thoughts come to mind and a surge of pressure comes to heart; do I ever want to loose my love...do I ever want to loose my candy kiss!! When I last lay on my side of our bed, your empty space next to me felt as if I was alone in this world- only the thoughts of loss and love in the minds of others accompanied me. Was I willing myself to hurt, forcing pain into my already fragile soul! Where had my candy kiss gone? And then your sweet, subtle perfume tantalized my senses and I opened my eyes just as your lips where meeting mine- soft delicate cold lips. It was like the fresh morning of earth breaking upon me- I was the tree feeling sunrise, the grass absorbing the rain- I was the bird the wind allowed to glide. I don't ever want it to be traumatic memory, but I fear it would be if my candy kisses fell on somebody else.

This was really something for me this morning. Those moments are what I am clinging onto. But they could well be worth it. Thank you debileah, this has reminded me of much I shouldn't forget.

[Adela Muresan]

Uhh, I like this =D. What better association than that of love and candy?
The euphony is very good, and I like the fact that you kept it short.
Great great work.

A.M.