Storm!

Black clouds and a melancholey heart

A broken soul is left torn apart

 

Skies of sunshine turned to gray

Today my three tiny angel's were taken away

 

Even the cleansing of the falling rain

Ceases not to take away this unbearable pain

Reviews

[Rain]

Very painful to read, but so well written. Rain..

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Painful indeed. How about "take away my unbearable pain" instead of this?

[Seriana]

This is very beautiful and tragic. And I felt it with so few words. Beautifully written and heartfelt.