She waits

Like a porcelain doll she sits

beneath a mighty tree

in the center of a stone laid circle

an ancient ruins be

A young maiden waits

a flower in her hand

As the sea washes upon the shore

revealing a stairway to the oceans floor

A forgotten city lies beneath these waves

As she breathes in the freshest air

A sea breeze ruffles her golden hair

Her lovely dress as blue as her eyes can be

as blue as the sky as blue as the sea

She waits for thee

 

Reviews

[Carole]

This is beautiful and I agree with the reviewer below on the changing of the font colors. It adds impact to this write.

Like a porcelain doll she sits

beneath a mighty tree

in the center of a stone laid circle

an ancient ruins be

Very nicely done....:-)

[Rogue Daffodil]

Lovely. I like how you wove details from the picture together into a seamless whole. Very nice indeed. Thank you so much for participating in the contest. :)


~Rogue Daffodil~

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

One of my favorites of yours.... I think it flowed quite well and I loved the different colors of the font... Your images were painted very well.... Good Job!