burnt love

My soulful sacrafice was made undone

It is now all over 

I made her a burnt offering

Now where do i belong

Making unlifely problems that i can not bear

It makes me feel alone

She dragged me down a hole

A hole i can't get out of

Now im laying there crying 

I miss her very name 
I can't seem to find you anymore 
She left me without a note

So now im left alone

In my hole my hole of broken hearted

Reviews

[Barbara Lynne]

my hole of broken hearted...so powerful...so sad...love your work

[Bianca La Salle]

i love it!!!

[alerodri]

this is so hopeless romantic, so pure somuch like a poet speaking

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

aww this is sad... but nicely filled with broken emotions... i loved this part with these lines:
"She dragged me down a hole
A hole i can't get out of
Now im laying there crying
I miss her very name "