For me.

For me.

A Poem by Deeksha

You hold me tight,
You hold me close,
I hear you heart,
beat for me.

You sigh with me,
You sigh for me,
With every breath,
You pray for me.

You take my pain,
Take it all away,
And give me love,
Love for me.

You gave it up,
You gave it all,
Let it all go,
All for me.

You hold my hand,
You hold it firm,
And promise to fight,
To fight for me.

You make me smile,
You make me laugh,
You're all I want,
All I need. 

You dream of a life,
You and Me,
Me for You, 
and You for Me.



© 2010 Deeksha



Author's Note

Deeksha
I'm still learning. Just my second poem. Criticism welcomed.


And, its straight from the heart. :)

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The last stanzas seemed inconsistent. Other than that, this is too good to be a second poetry. I was screwing up mine :P Do put up pictures in your writes :)

Keep writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Your second poem is it? Well Deeksha this was amazing! I loved the near repetition of various lines....it worked very well! Yes, I can see it was from your heart. This was a pure write and a pleasure to read! Thank you so much for submitting this to my valentine's contest! ~ Helena

Posted 7 Years Ago


this is beautiful!! Very enjoyable and soft from the heart.

-Will

Posted 7 Years Ago


:) damn nice :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Criticism if there were any :).
Beautiful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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